Recieving Music Video Draft Feedback (MK)

The two performers have lots of potential and charisma that is currently untapped.

• The mise en scene is very poor.
• The choice of shots is non existent.
• The performers must know all the words to the song and the rap.
• The rap must be delivered perfectly - we need to see all of this element lip synced.
• You do not need to lip sync the whole story.

Giving Advert and Digipak Feedback (KC)

As part of a class task, we were required to peer assess each others work and give constructive feedback to one another. This will then give the class members a sense of what the public react to their  work.